So I saw this car today. Except it wasn't a Mustang. But that sounds more badass than "Death Drives a Toyota." Anyway, then I just kind of...wrote this. Idek.
( And speaking of gorgeous freaking hot pink... )

Hey, could I get some homework help? Which of the following 5 scenes would you most like to see expanded into a full-length short story? I have to narrow my choices in the next two weeks, and I'd like to write something actually interesting, that real people would like to read.

( Scene 1: The one with the hot concession stand girl )

Have the poem I wrote for my poetry workshop this week. It's not happy.
PS: Ballads are way easy. It probably helps that I didn't stick strictly to meter, but I was quite close.

Nightmare at the Swimming HoleWhen Sarah woke up that morning ( Read more... )

A Pretty Young GirlA pretty young girl sits there in her room ( Read more... )

I can already hear my professor. It's cliched, it's poetic. The first line of the second stanza originally read "I'd mention Mom, tell you she's still a whore" but I decided that was a bad idea. Haha. This be a villanelle. The only thing I didn't do was iambic pentameter, but I did the rhyming right (mostly...I cheated a little with hopin'), ( Read more... )

My poetry professor would not approve of this poem. It's cliched and too poetic.

Carried AwayCould bes, maybes and never-will-bes ( Read more... )

Have the poem I wrote for this week's class. We had to do alliteration and assonance this week.

Morning ComesSunlight slices across street signs ( Read more... )

We had to use similes/metaphors. I feel like this is over the top or something. Or just bad ( Read more... )

Subject: Poetry Writing Workshop
Assignment: Use an object to express abstract feelings
Example: The Vacuum, Howard Nemerov
Mah Poem:He observes, but is ignored ( Read more... )

More original stuff!

( The first version I wrote )